This world use to be such a terrible place,you could compare it to hell yes hell, Humans were ruthless they would take there own fellow lives.The day when everybody was suppose to forgive and forget instead they fought and killed. Blood everywhere you go you might aswell call it bloodbath.Even though there is more things we should worry about instead of our bad doings this is also a bad doing.Before the blood bath there was 3 teenagers jide bapatude and yinka this was set in africa. A major out brake called "cocodohay" this was ruthless it would take your life in less than a millisecond. Unfortunately, Bapatunde was the one out of 3 teenagers to get this devestatiing virus it was sad but had to be done.

Beginning 

This world use to be such a terrible place,you could compare it to hell yes hell.The humans were were not civilised, they were treacherous.The area of were was named the motherland was now called "DeBloodbath".In the a place were living is hard and dying is easy there was 5 teenagers one was extremely weird nobody knew if it was just an ego to scare everybody or it was just normal for them.People made assumptions that he was infected by the new outbreak (which is called malaria) kill without you even knowing but that wasn't the case for Jide and Bapatunde.They were a lovely couple who were on the roll for a baby continuous trying and trying until they succeeded.

Dystopian Opening

Beginning 

This world use to be such a terrible place,you could compare it to hell yes hell.The humans were were not civilised, they were treacherous.The area of were was named the motherland was now called "DeBloodbath".In the a place were living is hard and dying is easy there was 5 teenagers one was extremely weird nobody knew if it was just an ego to scare everybody or it was just normal for them.People made assumptions that he was infected by the new outbreak (which is called malaria) kill without you even knowing but that wasn't the case for Jide and Bapatunde.They were a lovely couple who were on the roll for a baby continuous trying and trying until they succeeded.

Grammar For Writing

Dystopian Story Opening

5:Subordinate Clauses

It was a cold day and the clocks strikes thirteen,winston was walking home and slipped.

Winston Smith, though not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty dust from entering along with him

Relative Clauses

This does not care about society because all the litter.                                                                                    

The fish in the sea was happily living, Until the apex predator of the sea had to do what it does best and kill it.One happy day,the day all humans were happy their was a man guarding a £20,000 jewlary shop who looked very serious was he doing it for the citizens or for the money.As the man was crossing the boarder, three soldiers confronted him to check what he possesed in the car.Gmitra@school21.org.uk

Grammar For Writing

Relative Clauses
This does not care about society because all the litter.                                                                                  
The fish in the sea was happily living, Until the apex predator of the sea had to do what it does best and kill it.One happy day,the day all humans were happy their was a man guarding a £20,000 jewlary shop who looked very serious was he doing it for the citizens or for the money.As the man was crossing the boarder, three soldiers confronted him to check what he possesed in the car.Gmitra@school21.org.uk

Dystopian Opening

The fish in the sea was happily living, Until the apex predator of the sea had to do what it does best and kill it.One happy day,the day all humans were happy their was a man guarding a £20,000 jewlary shop who looked very serious was he doing it for the citizens or for the money.As the man was crossing the boarder, three soldiers confronted him to check what he possesed in the car.

Nineteen Eighty Four

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Grammar For Writing Stor Opening

Grammar for wririting Dystopian openings

Behind the dog, is a car

On top of the bridge, was a bird 

Under the bridge, was a fish