Wednesday 25 January 2017

What does the poem"By the sea" tell us about personality?

In the first paragraph the author wrote that Maggie discovered a shell that sang so sweetly she couldn't remember her troubles.

"Milly befriended a stranded star whose rays languid fingers were" that might mean she was friend s with the star in her imagination,that migh mean she doesent have friends in the inside world

"May came home with a smooth round stone as small as a world and as large as alone".That might mean she finds her likings very important and she sees things very differently to how others see it because the author thinks the stone is useless but she thinks it means something very special.

"Molly was chased by a horrible thing " you can infer that it is crab 🦀 Because crabs blow something to look like spit but it's actually bubbles . You can also see that if she is running away from a crab then she must be under 10years old to be running a long distance from a crab.

"For whatever we lose, it's always ourselves we find in the sea" I think it means when something goes missing someone else finds it it might mean she has lost something for special.

Thursday 5 January 2017

Poems

I don't really do this but I will try
I find hard to write poems
In that subject I ain't glowing
It isn't really that big of deal
Just like paying bills
I wish I was good at this
So I could send people to the Abiss
I am done with this just try and enjoy this

Thursday 15 December 2016

This world use to be such a terrible place,you could compare it to hell yes hell, Humans were ruthless they would take there own fellow lives.The day when everybody was suppose to forgive and forget instead they fought and killed. Blood everywhere you go you might aswell call it bloodbath.Even though there is more things we should worry about instead of our bad doings this is also a bad doing.Before the blood bath there was 3 teenagers jide bapatude and yinka this was set in africa. A major out brake called "cocodohay" this was ruthless it would take your life in less than a millisecond. Unfortunately, Bapatunde was the one out of 3 teenagers to get this devestatiing virus it was sad but had to be done.

Thursday 8 December 2016

Beginning 

This world use to be such a terrible place,you could compare it to hell yes hell.The humans were were not civilised, they were treacherous.The area of were was named the motherland was now called "DeBloodbath".In the a place were living is hard and dying is easy there was 5 teenagers one was extremely weird nobody knew if it was just an ego to scare everybody or it was just normal for them.People made assumptions that he was infected by the new outbreak (which is called malaria) kill without you even knowing but that wasn't the case for Jide and Bapatunde.They were a lovely couple who were on the roll for a baby continuous trying and trying until they succeeded.

Wednesday 7 December 2016

Dystopian Opening

Beginning 

This world use to be such a terrible place,you could compare it to hell yes hell.The humans were were not civilised, they were treacherous.The area of were was named the motherland was now called "DeBloodbath".In the a place were living is hard and dying is easy there was 5 teenagers one was extremely weird nobody knew if it was just an ego to scare everybody or it was just normal for them.People made assumptions that he was infected by the new outbreak (which is called malaria) kill without you even knowing but that wasn't the case for Jide and Bapatunde.They were a lovely couple who were on the roll for a baby continuous trying and trying until they succeeded.





Tuesday 29 November 2016

Grammar For Writing

Dystopian Story Opening

5:Subordinate Clauses

It was a cold day and the clocks strikes thirteen,winston was walking home and slipped.

Winston Smith, though not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty dust from entering along with him

Thursday 24 November 2016

Relative Clauses

This does not care about society because all the litter.                                                                                    

The fish in the sea was happily living, Until the apex predator of the sea had to do what it does best and kill it.One happy day,the day all humans were happy their was a man guarding a £20,000 jewlary shop who looked very serious was he doing it for the citizens or for the money.As the man was crossing the boarder, three soldiers confronted him to check what he possesed in the car.Gmitra@school21.org.uk